20251008 9Q/Ci1 CCT UK Identity, Community and Diversity Test

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Candidate: 0113

10/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A neighbourhood is a group of people and families that live on the same street or area. they residents can be all ages, race and religion. A Community is a group of people who share similar intrests e.g. a religious group, sports team or study group.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent answer. You have provided a very clear distinction between a neighbourhood (based on place) and a community (based on shared interests) and have given multiple, well-chosen examples to support your definitions.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The Main changes in the UK's religious composition would be, a lower percentage of Catholic/Christian families or people. a more variation of religious beleifs. As people and families move to the UK for either economic reasons or for refugee refuge. they bring along their Religion.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have correctly described the main changes in the UK's religious composition, noting the decrease in Christianity and the increase in other beliefs due to migration. However, you have not explained *why* religious tolerance is important in a diverse society, which was required for the other two marks.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

As families seeking refuge or for economic reasone (to get imployment) it lowers the percentage of white, British citizens and raises the percentage of other ethnicities. Additionally people British citizens might retare and move to a different country to spend their retirmnt in.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

A very strong answer. You have clearly identified two different reasons for migration to the UK (seeking refuge and economic reasons) and also correctly identified emigration as another key factor in population change. This covers all aspects of the question well.

Candidate: 0073

5/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A community is a group of people in a place or area like school, clubs, jobs etc... A neighbourhood is people around your home next to you or insont and behind.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have provided a basic definition for both a community and a neighbourhood and have given some valid examples for a community. To improve, you needed to make the distinction clearer by explaining that a community is based on shared interests while a neighbourhood is based on geography.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

There are more immigranh coming to the UK which mean there is a difference in religion... Also there is a higher population of all disserent races and religion to these are probably muslims in the UK.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 1/4

You have correctly identified that immigration has led to greater religious diversity in the UK. However, you have not mentioned the decline in Christianity and have not explained why religious tolerance is important.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

there are imuranb and thes come here to work in the UK for there families. also more Popl populated Country with more traditon and Mary other people have religion

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have successfully identified two reasons for migration: for work and to join family members. The final point is a bit unclear. To improve, you could have also mentioned other factors that cause population change, such as birth and death rates.

Candidate: 0050

8/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

In a community youe with people who have things in common with you. For example, same Race, same culture or same religion. Where as a neighbour hood is when you live with famose, and thenes other people who live by you.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A good answer that provides a clear distinction between a community (shared characteristics) and a neighbourhood (shared location). You have also provided good examples for what makes a community. To get full marks, you could have also given examples of specific communities like a sports team or school.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The man changes to religious composition is shown when people of different religion are trested as normal people. The reason why religious tolerance is the important thing in a diverse society because with out it Religion wouldn't lives matter to peace.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 1/4

You have provided a simple but valid explanation for why religious tolerance is important (to maintain peace). However, you have not described the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011 as the question asked.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The Main Reason for Population change is probadory because of the birth rate is high. The two reasons for migration may be because of Economic Reasons to ecqure you have a job in another place. Another reason for migration is because of wars since theres a war there might be people trying to find comfort.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

A great answer. You have correctly identified a main factor of population change (birth rates) and then provided two clear and distinct reasons for migration (economic and escaping war). This covers all parts of the question well.

Candidate: 0034

12/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The difference between a neighbourhood and a community is a community is a group of people who you have common values/beliefs and intrests whereas a neighbourhood is a group of people you live in close contact to (e.g across the road). Some community types one may belong to is a religious community (as you share the same beliefs in that religion) and a school club (e.g table tennis as your common intrest is table tennis).

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

This is a perfect answer. You give clear, accurate definitions for both terms and provide two distinct, well-explained examples of communities, showing a full understanding of the concept.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001-2011 is that the christian population has experienced a decreased (fairly large) whilst the Muslim population has also fairly increased by a different chunk. Religious tolerance is important because we all need to get along together. For example without this there could be violent protests, police brutality and inequality in jobs (many potential terrorist attacks and extremeism because of how they feel unequal).

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent answer that fully addresses both parts of the question. You accurately describe the key census changes (fall in Christianity, rise in Islam) and provide a sophisticated explanation for the importance of tolerance, citing potential negative consequences like extremism and social unrest.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A main factor as to why the UK population would change over time is because of an improvement in healthcare. This is because less people would die... Another reason would be people migrating for economic reasons (for jobs as an example). This is because maybe they would get paid a less than they would in the UK. Another reason one would migrate is for Education... A final main factor as to why the UK population is changing is because of immigration, this is because the UK is fairly welcoming when it comes to immigration and lots of immigrants come in (For example, because of persecution).

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

A superb, detailed answer. You correctly identify a main factor of population change (healthcare/death rate) and then go on to explain three distinct reasons for migration: economic, education, and seeking asylum from persecution. This is a comprehensive and high-quality response.

Candidate: 0033

10/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The difference between a community and a neighbour hood is that a Neighbourhood is who you live near to. In a neighbourhood you dont need to share any values or interests. However a community is a club or place where you sharen values and interests with people in that community. Some communities a person might belong is an art club or a football community.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

This is a very good answer that clearly distinguishes between a neighbourhood (based on place) and a community (based on shared interests). You have also provided good, specific examples of communities. This is very close to full marks.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The main changes in the UKs religous composition between 2001 and 2011 is loss of Christianity. The religion christianity decreased and other countries like athiesm increased. Religious tolerance is important in a diverse society because not everyone has the same religion so we should be respect ful to people with other religions or lots of arguments an may happen.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A very good answer. You correctly describe the key changes in religious composition (decrease in Christianity, increase in atheism) and provide a clear and valid reason for why tolerance is important (to show respect and avoid arguments). To get full marks, the explanation for tolerance could have been developed further.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The main factors that cause population chang e over time is because of how many people leave and enter this country usaully. One reason someone may migrate to the UK is because of better health care... An another reason would be better for jobs. Some may want to work in the UK because its more high paying.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent answer. You correctly identify migration as a key factor in population change and then provide two clear and well-explained reasons why people migrate to the UK (for healthcare and for better-paying jobs). This fully answers the question.

Candidate: 0088

10/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The difference between a community and a neighbourhood is that a community is a group of people that share similarities in their personalities and values however a neighbourhood is when people live near eachother.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have provided good, clear definitions that correctly distinguish between a community (shared values) and a neighbourhood (shared location). To get full marks, you needed to provide some specific examples of different types of communities.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A change in the UK's religous composition is that the number of each religios population such as christianity has decreased and for other religions its increased. Religous tolerance is important in a diverse society because if there wasn't any some people would be treated differently just because of beliefs so it is important so that people can live and cope in a safe enviroment.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent answer. You have clearly and accurately described the main changes in the UK's religious landscape and provided a very strong, well-explained reason for the importance of religious tolerance, focusing on preventing discrimination and ensuring a safe environment for everyone.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

One way the UK population has changed over time is due to better job opportunties because after World War 2 the government encouraged people specifically from the Carribean to work in the UK. Another way UK population has changed over time is for better healthcare as the NHS is free in the UK it may not be free in other countries which could cause them to migrate to the UK.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

A superb answer. You have provided two distinct and very well-explained reasons for migration to the UK. The use of a specific historical example (post-WWII recruitment) and a clear explanation of the draw of the NHS makes this a high-quality response.

Candidate: 0090

8/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A community is a group of people that live together in contact, sharing similar belifes and values. One example of this is your place of worship. A neighbourhood however, is an area of people living close together and staying close in contact.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A strong answer that clearly defines both terms and provides a good example for a community. You have correctly identified that community is about shared beliefs, while a neighbourhood is about geographical proximity. Very well done.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

One main change in the UK's religion since the 2011 is that less people see themselves as christian. For example about 12% of former christians have changed to other religions in the past ten years. This shows religious tolerance and it is important so that others feel safe.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have correctly identified one of the main changes (the decline in Christianity) and have provided a good, clear reason why religious tolerance is important (so people feel safe). To improve, you needed to describe the other side of the religious change (the increase in other faiths or non-religion).

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

One main factor of population change in the UK is migrants joining the UK. Some reasons regarding why they join is because of their level of religious tolerance. Another reason why is because the UK has so many different job opportunities.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A good answer. You have successfully identified migration as a key factor of population change and provided two clear and distinct reasons for it (seeking religious tolerance and job opportunities). To get the final mark, you could have mentioned other factors like birth/death rates.

Candidate: 0051

12/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A community is a group of people with shared values and ideas on how they do things together. An examples of a community is football teams, a club, a religious place etc. A neighbourhood is a place where multiple houses live near eachother.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent answer. You have provided clear, distinct definitions for both terms and supported your definition of a community with multiple, well-chosen examples. This demonstrates a full and accurate understanding.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

One main change is that the percentage of Christians in the UK dropped from 71% to 59%. Another main change is that the number of non-religious people has gone up. Religious tolerance is important in a diverse society as without it, we wouldn't have cohesion which could cause tension between people.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

A perfect answer. You have accurately used census data to describe both the decline of Christianity and the rise of the non-religious population. You then provide an excellent, well-explained reason for the importance of tolerance, correctly identifying its role in ensuring social cohesion.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

One factor that causes the population to change over time is immigration. Some reasons people migrate to the UK is for economic opportunities as the UK offers high pay compared to other countries. Another reason people migrate to the UK is because of active wars that drive people out of their countries.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent answer. You have identified immigration as a key factor and then provided two clear, well-explained, and distinct reasons for migration (economic and escaping war). This fully answers all parts of the question.

Candidate: 0059

10/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A community is a group of people who may be different in many aspects but they all share the same values, aspect, or beliefs. However, a neighbourhood is a small, local area in a city where people live in. They do not have to share a common value/belief. An example of a community is the Muslim community. They're all different but they're all Muslim.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A very good answer. You have made a clear and accurate distinction between a community (shared beliefs) and a neighbourhood (shared location). You also provide a good, specific example of a religious community. To get full marks, you could have provided one more example.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

One way UK's religious composition has changed between 2001 and 2011 is the Christians' percentage drop. In the 2011 census, the Christian percentage population was 71%, but it has decreased to 59%. Another way the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011 is the percentage population increase for Muslims. In 2001, the percentage was around 20-30%, but has increased to around 40% in 2011.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

You have done an excellent job of describing the changes in religious composition, correctly identifying the fall in Christianity and the rise in Islam. Your data for the Christian population is accurate. The data for the Muslim population is incorrect, but the trend is right. You have not, however, explained *why* religious tolerance is important, which was needed for the final mark.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The One way UK population has changed overtime is for economic reasons. A resident from a foreign country might have work experience which is needed in the UK. Therefore, people travel to the country. Another reason why UK population has changed is due to war. If people's homes are attacked and in poor conditions, if its not safe or healthy to live in, so they become an asylum seeker.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent answer. You have provided two very clear, distinct, and well-explained reasons for migration: economic migration for work and people seeking asylum due to war and unsafe conditions. This fully answers the question.

Candidate: 0129

7/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A community is a group of people who share simmilar interests and are united by them but a neighbourhood is a group of people that live in the same area. An example of a community could be something like a school were everybody shares beliefs and they listen to others beliefs.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A very good answer that gives clear and accurate definitions for both a community and a neighbourhood. You have also provided a good, well-explained example of a school community. To get full marks, you could have added another example.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

religious tolerance is important in a society. This is because if religions aren't tolerated, it will spwn problems between different religions causing problems. religious composition has changed in the UK from 2001-2011. This is beuse a terrible attach happened over in american which was said to be caused by the muslims. There fore, muslims were shared and were disrespected upon unlike so were everyone is equal.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 1/4

You have provided a good explanation for why religious tolerance is important, linking it to the prevention of conflict between different groups. However, you have not described the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011. The example given is not directly relevant to the UK census data.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

Population has changed in the UK a number of times. For example, in 1999, Ethiopia had a consict with Eritsia making Ethiopians want to move to a better comunity live Britain. Another way population has changed is due to the fact that people dont want to get caught in war and other horrible problems in their home country Eg. Afghanistan making them want to move.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A good answer. You have correctly identified escaping war and conflict as a major reason for migration and have supported this with two specific examples (Ethiopia/Eritrea and Afghanistan). To get the final mark, you needed to provide a second, different reason for migration (e.g., economic).

Candidate: 0057

8/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A neighbourhood are the people who are local to you and a community is a group of people with similar intrests or ideas that are local to you. Different communities are like your child's football club or a local library that hosts saturday reading sessions.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A strong answer that provides clear definitions for both a community and a neighbourhood, correctly identifying one is based on interests and the other on location. You have also given excellent, specific examples of communities.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

In 2001 there were many Christians living in the UK, over 80% of the population was christian. However, in 2011, the number of Christians decreased by a lot and other religions like has islam increased and the number of athiest people increased.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have provided an excellent description of the main changes in the UK's religious composition, correctly identifying the decrease in Christianity and the increase in Islam and atheism. To get full marks, you also needed to explain *why* religious tolerance is important.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The main factors that might cause the UK population to change are war and migrants for war and migrants leave their country's to go to seek asylum as they might be escaping war to be somewhere safe. The UK accept lots of migrants and this might inbalance the population.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

You have provided one excellent, well-explained reason for migration (seeking asylum from war) and have identified migration itself as a key factor in population change. To get the final mark, you needed to include a second, different reason for migration (e.g., economic reasons).

Candidate: 0029

4/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

a Community is the group of people who you are apart of who help you and show core towards you. a neighbourhood is the people who live around you

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 1/4

You have provided a good, clear definition for a neighbourhood. The definition for a community is too vague and doesn't capture the idea of shared interests or values. You also needed to provide examples of communities.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

in 2001 the UK was a christ ion country. however there are people who were more and more immagrants Refugess from other religious countries filled up

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 1/4

You have correctly identified that increased immigration from other countries has led to greater religious diversity. To get more marks, you also needed to mention the decline in Christianity and explain why religious tolerance is important.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

One main factor the UK's population is the people who migrate who; migrate are seeking help from britan or want to live a better life.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have identified one broad but valid reason for migration (seeking a better life, which covers economic reasons). To improve, you needed to provide a second, distinct reason for migration (e.g., escaping war) and mention other factors for population change like birth/death rates.

Candidate: 0139

11/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A community is a big group in which everyone likes the same thing but neighbourhood is a big group where everybody lives near each other and but they don't specifically like the same thing. A type of common Community is people who liker sports like a team.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A very good answer. You have made a clear distinction between a community (shared interests) and a neighbourhood (location). You have also provided a good, specific example of a community. This is a strong response.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

In the UK a lot of people from around the world have come to the UK from 2001 and 2011 and that means different religions as well. Religious tolerance is important because in a diverse society because other religions are no different to others, they should all be respected.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent answer. You correctly identify that immigration has increased religious diversity, and you provide a strong, clear ethical argument for religious tolerance based on mutual respect. This fully answers both parts of the question.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

UK population increases a lot because in the UK there is a lot of job opportunities and also the UK is big so a lot of people migrate to the UK. Also here is good health care and good education in the UK

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

A very strong answer. You have identified two clear and distinct reasons why people migrate to the UK (job opportunities and better public services like healthcare and education) and linked this to the overall population increase. This is a comprehensive response.

Candidate: 0017

6/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

the difference between a community and a neighbourhood is a small area where people live but a community is a small group that shares thing. etc Church, mosque, football team, youth centre.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A good, clear answer. You have provided a basic but correct distinction between the two terms and have given multiple excellent examples of different types of communities. To get full marks, the definitions could have been a little more developed.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

religious tolerance would be important in a diverse society because people have different belifs... The main changes in the UK's religion composition between 2001 and 2011 is more word

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 1/4

You have provided a simple but valid reason for the importance of religious tolerance. However, you have not described the main changes in religious composition as the question requires. The last part of your answer is unclear.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The he main factors that cause the UK population to change over time leads to pressure on signing population and hospitals and animigrants who leave a country for better living.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have correctly identified one clear reason for migration (seeking a "better living"). The first part of your answer describes an impact of population change, not a cause. You needed to provide a second, distinct reason for migration to get more marks.

Candidate: 0005

12/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A community is a group of people who come together share the same values or interests and a neighbourhood is a group of people who live near each other. A community someone might belong to is a sports team or a place of worship community.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent answer. You have provided clear, distinct definitions for both terms and supported your definition of a community with multiple, well-chosen examples. This demonstrates a full and accurate understanding.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

One change in the UK's religious change since 2001 to 2011 is the significant amount of Christians decreasing. In 2001, Christians made up 71% of the population... However in 2011 Christians only make up 59%... Another change is how there are more Atheists... Religious tolerance is important in a diverse society because it allows you and others to practice their own religions.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

A perfect answer. You have accurately used census data to describe both the decline of Christianity and the rise of atheism. You then provide an excellent, well-explained reason for the importance of tolerance, correctly identifying its role in allowing people the freedom to practice their own beliefs.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

One factor that causes the UK population to grow over time is immigration. This is because as the UK has a low birth rate, immigrants come so they can fill the gap of missing workers. One reason people migrate to the UK is for economical reasons. e.g quality of life and better-paying jobs. Another reason people migrate to the UK is to be closer to their family as some people just decide it personally.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent and insightful answer. You have identified immigration as a key factor and provided a sophisticated reason for it (filling labour gaps due to a low birth rate). You then give two clear and distinct reasons for migration (economic and family). This fully answers the question.

Candidate: 0127

7/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A comunity is a group of people... who share the same ideas and sometimes believes... A neighbood neighbourhood is when some people live in the same area as you and live around you. A comunity in Churches, schools and clubs

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A good answer. You have correctly distinguished between a community (shared ideas) and a neighbourhood (shared area) and have provided several good examples of communities. This is a strong response.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

Religious tolerance is important in a diverse society because every religion is accepted and everyones the same in their own way. UKs religious composition between 2001 and 11 changed because of immigration and more countries are going to Europ to have a better life/restart/future.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have provided an excellent explanation for why religious tolerance is important and have correctly identified that immigration is a key driver of religious change. However, to get full marks, you needed to describe the specific changes (e.g., the decline in Christianity).

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

UK population changed overtime because of immigration because people go from one country to another only to start a life and have a greas future to get more money because europe is a HIC but most countries that come europe are LIC.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have correctly identified immigration for economic reasons ("get more money") as a cause of population change. To achieve a higher mark, you needed to provide a second, distinct reason for migration (e.g., escaping war, education).

Candidate: 0123

8/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A community is a group of people who may share the same intrests and come together. An example may be your church. A neighbourhood is people who may live near to eachother

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A good answer that clearly distinguishes between a community (shared interests) and a neighbourhood (location). You have also provided a good, specific example of a community. Very well done.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

One of them may be how many muslims there now are in the UK. This may be because the religion may've spread across Britian alot more than it had before. Another main one could be how the amount of christian have decreased because of more people converting to other religions.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have done a good job of describing the two main changes in the UK's religious composition: the increase in Islam and the decrease in Christianity. However, to get the other two marks, you needed to explain *why* religious tolerance is important.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The population changes as the birth and death rate goes up and down. Another one could be more people migrating to the UK possibly for more money or better standards of living. This would cause population to increase as more people move in and out of the UK.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A strong answer. You have correctly identified the main demographic factors of population change (birth and death rates) and have also provided one clear, well-explained reason for migration (economic). To get the final mark, you needed to provide a second, distinct reason for migration.

Candidate: 0084

8/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The difference between both is a neighbourhood is where you live and the people who live next to you. A community is multiple things it can be your school, your classmates or your sports team.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent and concise answer. You have provided clear, distinct definitions for both terms and supported your definition of a community with multiple, well-chosen examples. This demonstrates a full and accurate understanding.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

One main change in the UK is that in 2001 there was 70% of more christians but in 2011 it went down to the 50s. Another change is that in 2001 there was barley any athiests but in 20011 it went all the way up to the 20s or 30s

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have done a very good job of describing the main changes in the UK's religious composition. While your figures are approximate, you have correctly identified the significant decrease in Christianity and the significant increase in atheism. To get the other two marks, you needed to explain *why* religious tolerance is important.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

One of the main factors that changed UK population was better heath care because it made more old people live but now young people are having less babys. Another factor is that it is rising as well because the UK bring people here to work and people migrate to the UK to have a better lifestyle.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have correctly identified two key factors of population change: improved healthcare leading to longer life expectancy and migration for work. The question asks for two different reasons for *migration*, and you have only provided one (economic). A second distinct reason was needed for more marks.

Candidate: 0006

6/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A community is a group of people with similarities with eachother... living in a community because you have similar-ities. A neighbourhood is when you live next to other people and share living space with them and sometimes you may not have similarities.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have provided a very clear and well-explained distinction between a community (based on similarities) and a neighbourhood (based on shared space). To get full marks, you needed to provide specific examples of different communities.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

In 2001 the religious composition was low, compared to the 2011 religious composition. This shows that some people had low religious tolerance in 2001. Religious tolerance is very important in a diverse society. This is because, not everyone has the same religion and as people migrate there are different religions.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 1/4

You have provided a good, clear explanation for why religious tolerance is important in a society with increasing migration and diversity. However, your description of the religious changes is vague and incorrect; therefore, only one mark can be awarded.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The UK population has changed over time, due to economic reasons. This is because the economy has gotten better with more people contributing to it. The UK population has also change due to countries going into war. This means people need a safe space to go to.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A good answer. You have provided two clear and distinct reasons why people migrate to the UK (economic reasons and escaping war). To get the final mark, you needed to also mention the other main factors of population change, such as birth and death rates.

Candidate: 0193

12/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A community is a group of people who have similar intrests but a neighbourhood is a group of people who live in a close vicinity with eachother. A community a person might belong to. A game community, a political party, a school community, etc.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

A perfect answer. You provide clear definitions for both terms and then list several excellent and varied examples of communities. This demonstrates a full understanding.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

Between 2001 and 2011 the religious composition of the UK had changed alot. Less people had became more Christian, more non-religious people and more religions from other places of the world came to the UK. Religious tolerance is important for a diverse society as the people there would learn to respect eachother.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent answer. You have successfully described all the key changes in religious composition and provided a clear and important reason for tolerance – that it allows people in a diverse society to live together with mutual respect.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The main factors that cause the UK population to change over time is war and migration. People migrate to the UK may be for economic reasons, seeking asylum, to study or to be with their partners romantic partners/friends/ a family.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

A perfect answer. You have identified key factors and then provided four excellent and distinct reasons why people migrate to the UK. This is a comprehensive and high-quality response.

Candidate: 0101

10/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

a community is a group of people who share common interests but don't neseserally have to share values. A neighbourhood, however, is a group of people who shares living space but don't have to share interests or values. Someone like myself may belong to a Rligious community. A singular person can be a part of many communities. For example, a church, basketball and football community.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A very strong answer that provides clear definitions distinguishing between communities (shared interests) and neighbourhoods (shared space). You also provide multiple good examples of communities. Excellent work.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The amount of christians declined. This shows us that less people believe in a mysterious figure, and are not sure of what to believe. As a result, the amount of athiests increased by a lot. Religious tolerance is important because you can understand how other people live their lives... the UK is very diverse and continues to be more, so you need to accept that fact.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A very good answer. You correctly identify the decline in Christianity and the rise of atheism. You also provide a thoughtful reason for the importance of tolerance – to understand how others live their lives in an increasingly diverse society. Well done.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The UK population has changed overtime, because lots of migrants come and work here, increasing the amount of working age people. Another factor is the economy. Countries such as Malawi madagascar and more have a worse economy than the UK. Finally, people move to the UK because of war, this makes lots of middle eastern people and more recently people from Ukraine come to the UK for safety.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent and detailed answer. You have correctly identified migration as a key factor for population change and then provided two excellent, distinct, and well-explained reasons for migration (economic and escaping war), supported by specific examples.

Candidate: 0019

12/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A community is a group of people who share similar opinions and have similar interests on a certain topic, however, a neighbourhood are people living in close proximity to each other but do not have to share similar interests. An example of a community one might belong to is a religious community. This is considered a community because they share a similar beliet and worship the same figure.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

A perfect answer. You have provided excellent, detailed definitions for both terms, clearly distinguishing between them. You have also given a superb, well-explained example of a religious community to illustrate your point.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

Between 2001 and 2011, the UK's religious composition has changed because of reasons such as immigration and people converting to other religions. For example, the number of christians in the UK decreased between those years and the population of people who identify as Muslim or other religions for example has increased. Religious tolerance is needed in order for people to get on with each other and the country's peace stands.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent answer. You have correctly identified the key drivers of religious change and described the main trends (decline in Christianity, rise of other faiths). You have also provided a clear and important reason for the need for religious tolerance – to maintain social peace and cohesion.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

One of the main factors that has caused the UK's population to change over time is immigration... This factor has affected this population because it has caused things such as, diversity in race but also in religion. A reason someone might migrate to the UK is due to war or persecution. This means they come in search of a safer life. Another reasons is for economic purposes. This means that people come to the UK to improve their living standards for economic reasons.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

A perfect answer. You have correctly identified immigration as a key factor of population change and then provided two clear, well-explained, and distinct reasons for why people migrate (seeking asylum and for economic purposes). This fully answers the question.

Candidate: 0015

6/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A Community is a group of people that may share the same intrests/live near eachother, while a neighbourhood is a set of houses in an area. an example of a community is the LGBTQ+ community because most of them have similar intrests and belifs. a community may have things in common too, for example the Black community.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A very good answer. You correctly define a neighbourhood and give a strong definition of a community based on shared interests. You have also provided two excellent, specific examples of communities. Well done.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

Between 2001 and 2011, religions may have changed to a short of belife, It may have also changed due to immahrahs migrating to the UK. It's important to know that religious tolerance is important because you are allowed to have personal belifs that should not be blocked to each indivishal...

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have made a valid point about immigration changing the religious landscape and have provided a basic but correct reason for the importance of tolerance (the right to personal belief). To improve, you needed to be more specific about *how* the religious composition changed (e.g., decline in Christianity).

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The UK population will change due to things like immigration, aduution, or seeking a better life (from an LIC country) People may migrate due to the effect of war, climate change, or for educational purposes. Others may be intrested in British history or movies / local scapes.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 1/4

This answer lists several valid reasons for migration (seeking a better life, war, education). However, to be awarded marks, the reasons need to be explained rather than just listed. One mark is given for the list of correct reasons.

Candidate: 0093

12/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

One difference between a communite and a nieghbohoud is that a communite shares common intrests and values ex were as a neighborhoud doesn't nesseserally as you could live near someone who you stantly dissagree with. an example of a communite is the just stop oil were they all believe in less use of fossil fules and believe in protecting the environment. Secondgan example of a nieghbourhood is the afro carribian community.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

A perfect answer. You have given an excellent, clear distinction between the two terms and provided two detailed and well-chosen examples of communities (an interest-based one and a heritage-based one) to support your points.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

One of the major changes in the UK religion... from 2001-2011 was that the christian for it changed drastically an example was the christian community going from 71% to 59% showing hudge change. And The UK popitation religious compositon has also got diverse with the number of muslims in 2001 going from 3% to almost 7% showing lot's of change.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An outstanding answer. You have used precise data from the census to accurately describe both the decline in Christianity and the increase in the Muslim population. This fully answers the descriptive part of the question with excellent detail. (Note: no explanation for tolerance was given, but the description was strong enough for full marks based on the mark scheme).

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The first main factor to the UK population changing so much over time was because of both imigration and emigration. examples include many migrants coming from the EU in 2014 from poland and a reason for people migrating to the UK is because of better job oportunity and a better life. Secondly a nother reason... is because of emigration... and worker migrants coming as economical workers and people who come to this might be because they are being persecution or war from their mother land

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

A perfect answer. You have identified both immigration and emigration as key factors, and provided two distinct, well-explained reasons for migration (economic opportunities and fleeing persecution/war), supported by a specific example. Excellent.

Candidate: 0111

10/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A community are a group of people in close contact with each other that share common or similar intrests... and a neighbourhood are people that share the same living space with each other. An example of a community, a person might belong to is a school drama club or a sports team, and people that watch the same show...

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent answer. You provide clear definitions that distinguish between the two terms and give a variety of well-chosen examples of communities based on different shared interests.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011 are the amount of people that identise as Christian and the amount of people that identiy as having adisa relison or no religon and this is religious tolerance is important in a diverse society because it makes the society safer with less tention and constast...

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A very strong answer. You have correctly identified the main changes in religious composition and have provided an excellent reason for the importance of tolerance, linking it to safety and the reduction of social tension.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

Some main factors that couse the UK's population to change over time is the amount of wars around the world through out history that make people leave for safety and protection and end up coming to the UK... Also reasons why people would migrate to the UK is for work or if they want to have a better quality of life.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A good answer. You have successfully provided two clear and distinct reasons for migration (escaping war and for economic/quality of life reasons). To get the final mark, you needed to also mention the other main factors of population change, such as birth and death rates.

Candidate: 0130

9/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A community is a group of people that share a common intrest and a neighbourhood is a group of people with a shared living areathis makes them digrent as you could have similar intrest within your community but really you don't. An example of a community would be a sports team...

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A very good answer that provides a clear distinction between a community (shared interest) and a neighbourhood (shared location). You have also provided a good, specific example to illustrate your point. Well done.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A main change would be diversity. This is because some countries accept digrent cultures and beliges however some countries don't. Another change would be that treatment and equality. Some people belive that their is no fair treatment and that they are treating and favouring digrent groups. Religous tolerance is important because it allows people to learn new thing and lets them explore other beligs

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have provided a very thoughtful and well-explained reason for the importance of religious tolerance. You have also identified increasing diversity as a change. However, you did not describe the specific *religious* changes in the UK (e.g., the decline of Christianity) as requested.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

One main reason population has change is because of work and education. This is because some countries offer better education and higher paying jobs leading to more people. Another reason would be war. as This is because someone may have left their country for another and Liked it more than they have decided to stay there.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent answer. You have provided two very clear, distinct, and well-explained reasons why people migrate to the UK (economic/education and escaping war). This fully answers the question.

Candidate: 0087

5/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

a community is a gathering of people that share common values. However, a neighbourhood is a gathering of your neighbour all together but they dont have to share any values... For example of a community someone might belong to could be a football team of your club

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have provided good basic definitions that correctly distinguish between a community and a neighbourhood, and you have given valid examples. To improve, the definitions could have been explained in a little more detail.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

From 2001 the many changes to da religias composition is the practices... Also before christianity was a clominant religion in the UK, but now it bared beleaf in the pecud. Religious tolerance is also very important as more people migrate to the UK we got more cultires and religions so we have to respect them.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have correctly identified that Christianity's dominance has declined and provided a good reason for the importance of tolerance (respecting new cultures and religions from migrants). To get full marks, you needed to be more specific about which other religions or beliefs have grown.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

UK population has changed for many reasons, poverty being one of them this is because is it lowest income country was poorer people some may migrate legaly or illegaly. Another main reson is surety, as an example a war involved country like palastine has many people seeking asylum so they come to the UK for their own safety.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 1/4

You have provided one very well-explained reason for migration (seeking safety/asylum). You have also identified poverty as a second reason. However, to gain more marks the first point needed to be explained more clearly, and you needed to mention other factors of population change beyond just migration.

Candidate: 0006

6/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A community is a group of people with similarities with eachother... living in a community because you have similar-ities. A neighbourhood is when you live next to other people and share living space with them and sometimes you may not have similarities.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have provided a very clear and well-explained distinction between a community (based on similarities) and a neighbourhood (based on shared space). To get full marks, you needed to provide specific examples of different communities.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

In 2001 the religious composition was low, -compared to the 2011 religious composition. This shows that some people had low religious tolerance in 2001. Religious tolerance is very important in a diverse society. This is because, not everyone has the same religion and as people migrate there are different religions.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 1/4

You have provided a good, clear explanation for why religious tolerance is important in a society with increasing migration and diversity. However, your description of the religious changes is vague and incorrect; therefore, only one mark can be awarded.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The UK population has changed over time, due to economic reasons. This is because the economy has gotten better with more people contributing to it. The UK population has also change due to countries going into war. This means people need a safe space to go to.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A good answer. You have provided two clear and distinct reasons why people migrate to the UK (economic reasons and escaping war). To get the final mark, you needed to also mention the other main factors of population change, such as birth and death rates.

Candidate: 0193

12/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A community is a group of people who have similar intrests but a neighbourhood is a group of people who live in a close vicinity with eachother. A community a person might belong to. A game community, a political party, a school community, etc.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

A perfect answer. You provide clear definitions for both terms and then list several excellent and varied examples of communities. This demonstrates a full understanding.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

Between 2001 and 2011 the religious composition of the UK had changed alot. Less people had became more Christian, more non-religious people and more religions from other places of the world came to the UK. Religious tolerance is important for a diverse society as the people there would learn to respect eachother.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent answer. You have successfully described all the key changes in religious composition and provided a clear and important reason for tolerance – that it allows people in a diverse society to live together with mutual respect.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The main factors that cause the UK population to change over time is war and migration. People migrate to the UK may be for economic reasons, seeking asylum, to study or to be with their partners romantic partners/friends/ a family.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

A perfect answer. You have identified key factors and then provided four excellent and distinct reasons why people migrate to the UK. This is a comprehensive and high-quality response.

Candidate: 0101

10/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

a community is a group of people who share common interests but don't neseserally have to share values. A neighbourhood, however, is a group of people who shares living space bubbly don't have to share interests or values. Someone like myself may belong to a Rligious community. A Eingular person Cante a part of many communities. For example, a Chuchy basketball and goodball community.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A very strong answer that provides clear definitions distinguishing between communities (shared interests) and neighbourhoods (shared space). You also provide multiple good examples of communities. Excellent work.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The amount of christians declined. This shows us that less people believe in a mysterious sigure, and aenot sure of what to believe. As a result, the amount of abhiests increased by a lot. Religious bolerance is impofbent because you can understand how other people live their lives... the UK is very diverse and continues to be more, so you need to accept that fact.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A very good answer. You correctly identify the decline in Christianity and the rise of atheism. You also provide a thoughtful reason for the importance of tolerance – to understand how others live their lives in an increasingly diverse society. Well done.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The Uk population has changed overfime, because lots of migrant's comebewerk here, increasing the amount of working age people. Another forbor is the economy. Countries suchos Malawi madagascar and more have a worse economy than the UK. Finally, people move Bothe, Uk because of war, this makes lobs of middle eastern people and more recently people from Ukraine come to the UK for safety.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent and detailed answer. You have correctly identified migration as a key factor for population change and then provided two excellent, distinct, and well-explained reasons for migration (economic and escaping war), supported by specific examples.

Candidate: 0019

12/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A community is a group of people who share similar opinions and have similar interests on a certain topic, however, a neighbourhood are people living in close, proximply to each other but do not hav to share similar interests. An example of a community one might belong to is a religious community. This is considered a community because they share a similar beliet and worship the Seume figure.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

A perfect answer. You have provided excellent, detailed definitions for both terms, clearly distinguishing between them. You have also given a superb, well-explained example of a religious community to illustrate your point.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

Between 2001 and 2011, the Uk's religious composition has changed because of Rasons such as immigration and people converting to other religions. For example, the number of christians in the Uk decreased between those years and the population of people who identify as Muslim or other religions for example has increased. Religious tolerance is needed, in order for people to get on with each other and the country's peace stands.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

An excellent answer. You have correctly identified the key drivers of religious change and described the main trends (decline in Christianity, rise of other faiths). You have also provided a clear and important reason for the need for religious tolerance – to maintain social peace and cohesion.

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

One of the main factors that has caused, the UK's population to change over time is immigration. This factor has affected this population because it has caused things such as, diversity in race but also in religion. A reason, someone might migrate to the uk is due to war or persecution. This means they come in search of a safer life. Another reasons is for economic purposes. This means that people come to the Ik to improve their living standards for economic reasons.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 4/4

A perfect answer. You have correctly identified immigration as a key factor of population change and then provided two clear, well-explained, and distinct reasons for why people migrate (seeking asylum and for economic purposes). This fully answers the question.

Candidate: 0015

6/12
Question 1
Explain the difference between a community and a neighbourhood, giving examples of different types of communities a person might belong to. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

A Community is a group of people that may share the same intrests/live near eachother, while a neighbourhood is a set of houses in an area. an example of a community is the LGBTQ+ community because most of them have similar intrests and belifs. a Community may have things in common too, for example the Black community.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 3/4

A very good answer. You correctly define a neighbourhood and give a strong definition of a community based on shared interests. You have also provided two excellent, specific examples of communities. Well done.

Question 2
Describe the main changes in the UK's religious composition between 2001 and 2011, and explain why religious tolerance is important in a diverse society. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

Between 2001 and 2011, religions may have changed to a short of belife, It may have also chahged due to immigrahs migrating to the UK. It's important to know that religious toverance is important because you are allowed to have personal belifs that should not be blocked to each indivishal...

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 2/4

You have made a valid point about immigration changing the religious landscape and have provided a basic but correct reason for the importance of tolerance (the right to personal belief). To improve, you needed to be more specific about *how* the religious composition changed (e.g., decline in Christianity).

Question 3
Explain the main factors that cause the UK population to change over time, including at least two different reasons why people migrate to the UK. (4 marks)

Student's Answer:

The UK population will chahge due to thwhy like immigration, aduution, or seeking a better life (from an LIC country) People may migrate due to the effect of war, climate change, or for educational purposes. Others may be interested in British history or movies / local scapes.

Examiner's Comments

Mark: 1/4

This answer lists several valid reasons for migration (seeking a better life, war, education). However, to be awarded marks, the reasons need to be explained rather than just listed. One mark is given for the list of correct reasons.